I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
We had to make a animation to teach a five year old how to brush their teeth. for this we are learning about Personal Hygiene in Health. It is good to keep clean so that the bad bacteria's in your mouth go away and keep the good one's.
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Hi I really like your animation but you need to be more precise in what your actually doing and you need to say more of what to do.
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