I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Ayla, I really like how you have made some of your own characters and you did not just use the photos of google. I also Love The title it made it pop out more and made me want to look at your post. Maybe next time you could Label some of the things on the picture. good job Ayla :)
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That reminded me of when i watched a movie called finding Nemo and it had heaps of fish in it.
ReplyDeleteI ment that reminded me of... the finding Nemo movie.
ReplyDeleteHey Ayla, I really like how you have made some of your own characters and you did not just use the photos of google. I also Love The title it made it pop out more and made me want to look at your post. Maybe next time you could Label some of the things on the picture. good job Ayla :)
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