I found it hard to think of an idea for my story i was tossing between doing 2 ideas then i came up with a completely Different one
I found it easy to keep on writing this once i found my idea
I will update you when my story is finished
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Great writing Ayla! I enjoyed talking with you about your ideas for this story. It's good that you managed to get this far with your writing and I am looking forward to hearing what the loud 'bang' was! You used onomatopoeia well to create a tense mood: creek, drip, bang!
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I'm glad your Looking forward to seeing what the 'bang' was,I have a suspenseful idea for the next paragraph as well, before the story ends and they figure out what is. :)
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