I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For the first week of the the term for literacy we got given a would you rather sheet so for our work we had to pick one question and right a answer why we choose that one. I have two that I have chosen to do
Hi Ayla I really like your would you rather and it was really nice how you chose to give the money to charity.Oh and why did you have to do this did the teacher tell you to do it or did you have to do it for your work.
It was for our work we had a sheet or would you rather questions we had to pick one to start with and write a whole backstory and at least 3 sentences with two be causes of why we picked that option. And I would like to known what one you would pick?
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ayla i love this it is so good athow the ather ones where good i wode pic the ones you did eny bye
ReplyDeleteNice one Ayla I liked how you picked you would rather give 10,000 dollars to charity
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ReplyDeleteHi Ayla it's Aliyah
ReplyDeleteI really like your questions It really made me think . Maybe next time you could put more colour
Hi Aliyah I did what you said do you think that it is better now or could It be better?
DeleteIt is allot better but on I think it just gives it a pop of colour you know what I mean !
DeleteI kinda don't know what you mean but I do so do you mean a bit to much colour?
DeleteNo I really like it Ayla .
DeleteOk so do you think it is all good now?
DeleteYes I do
DeleteHi Ayla I really like your would you rather and it was really nice how you chose to give the money to charity.Oh and why did you have to do this did the teacher tell you to do it or did you have to do it for your work.
ReplyDeleteIt was for our work we had a sheet or would you rather questions we had to pick one to start with and write a whole backstory and at least 3 sentences with two be causes of why we picked that option. And I would like to known what one you would pick?
ReplyDeleteI would pick charity. Here's my blog can you have a look on it please: https://shsmikaylah.blogspot.com/
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